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文中有几处错误的句子，部分句子偏简单；作者能较准确地使用丰富的词汇，但请认真检查词汇的拼写；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
In this time,we are in the college.our money from parents.We shuold save our money.However,in some parts ,the money is used necessarily. At the information age,teengers are going through a high speed life .They like fresh things and always change their out-date things .They always buy some extra things that they don't need.I think this money can be saved.If we have enough clothe,we don't have to buy more .It's a weast action.As a student,we must buy exercise books ,that is a fear we must pay for.We want a wonderful future,we must work hard and study hard,so the money spend on education is necessary. In conclusion,we should be careful when we use money.when spend money and where spend is important .
