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字数：300 满分：100分
如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文章词汇表达比较丰富，但学术词汇稍显欠缺，此外拼写检查要重视；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
In this time,we are in the college.Our money come from our parents,so should we save our money.However,in some parts ,the money is used necessarily. At the information age,teengers are like shopping on the Internet.They like fresh things and always change their out-date things.They always buy some extra things that they don't need.I think this money can be saved.If we have enough clothe,we don't have to buy more .It's a weast action.As a student,we must buy exercise books ,that is a fear we must pay for.We want a wonderful future,we must work hard and study hard,so the money spend on education is necessary. In conclusion,we should be careful when we use money.when spend money and where spend is important.
