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字数：300 满分：100分
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In this time,we are in the college.Our money come from our parents,so should we save our money.However,in some parts,the money is used necessarily. One side,at the Internet age,teenagers are like shopping on line.When seeing some update things,they may stuitute these for their out things.Besides,They always buy some extra things that they don't need.In my opinion, this money can be saved.For example ,if we have enough clothe to wear,we don't have to buy more .It's a wast action.On the other side,as students,we must buy exercise books ,that is a fear we must pay for.We want wonderful future,we must work hard and study hard,so the money spend on education is necessary. In conclusion,we should be careful when we use money.When spend money and where spend are important to look for.
