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字数：300 满分：100分
文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
In this time,we are in the college.Our money come from our parents,so should we save our money.However,in some parts,the money is used necessarily. One side,at the Internet age,teenagers are like shopping on line.When seeing some update things,they may substitute these for their outing things.Besides,They always buy some extra things that they don't need.In my opinion, this money can be saved.For example,if we have enough clothe to wear,we don't have to buy more .It's a wast action.On the other side,as students,we must buy exercise books ,that is a fear we must pay for.We want wonderful future,we must work hard and study hard,so the money spend on education is necessary. In conclusion,we should be careful when we use money.When and where we should spend money are essential for us to look for.
