Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;丰富从句的使用,文章会更出色;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
Education From the table,we can see the relationship between education and employment as well as the earning. It's obvious that the higher education meanings the lower unemployment rate and more earnings. Science and technology thoroughly change our life,well education is the basic and most important. Knowledge gives us the ability to do what we can't before and what contributes to the society. A person who has higher education usually possess many moralities which push him to do more meaning things and make who's life valuable. The difference in the different levels of education is very big,the data clearly show us the importance of education,so we all should receive the education,and try our best to do it well,we should have high aim in life and study all the life,in a word,implement our value of life.