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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46199
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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Education From the table,we can see the relationship between education and employment as well as the earning. It's obvious that the higher education means the lower unemployment rate and more earnings. Science and technology thoroughly change our life,and education is the basic and most important. Knowledge gives us the ability to do what we can't before and what contributes to the society. A person who has higher education usually has many moralities which push him to do more meaning things and make him life valuable in turn. The difference in the different levels of education is very big,the data clearly show us the importance of education,so we all should receive the education,and try our best to do it well,we should have high aim in life and study all the life,in a word,implement our value of life. The higher education means more bright future,let's pursuit of knowledge.

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