2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但学术词汇稍显不足；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

computer and man there exists a saying like this,"the real danger is not the computer will begin to think like man,but that man will begin to think like the computer"such a viewpoint really make sense,as more and more people are adversely affected by the computer. There is no denying that computer brought us much information.For instance,when we want to get some learning materials,just click the mouse will make them appear on the screen,so people hold that computer is becoming more intellect like human beings.However,every coin has two sides..In the Information Age,people lost the ability to think independently and classify what is useful to them or not,that is to say,computer changes people's way of thinking.Take the following situation for example,when students are asked to hand in a composition,their first action is to open up their laptop and type the title on the Baidu.com.There is no doubt that they get nothing from this homework at all. For my opinion,computer is just a tool for us to be more competitive and people is s kind of logistic animal ,so only thinking by ourselves can we make full use of the computer.