2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活，希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇作者句法知识扎实，可适当增加从句的使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

There exists a saying like this,"the real danger is not the computer will start to think like man,but that man will begin to think like the computer"such a viewpoint really make sense,as more and more people are adversely affected by the computer. There is no denying that computer brought us much information.For instance,when we want to get some learning materials,just click the mouse will make them appear on the screen,so people hold that computer is becoming more intellect like human beings.However,every coin has two sides..In the Information Age,people lost the ability to think independently and classify what is useful to them or not,that is to say,computer alters people's way of thinking.Take the following situation for example,when students are asked to write a composition,their first action is to open up their laptop and type the title on the website.There is no doubt that they get nothing from this homework at all. For my opinion,computer is just a tool for us to be more competitive and people is s kind of logical animal,so only thinking by ourselves can we make full use of the computer.