2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活，希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

There exists a saying like this,"the real danger is not the computer will start to think like man,but that man will begin to think like the computer"such a viewpoint really make sense,as more and more people are adversely affected by the computer. There is no denying that computer brought us much information.For instance,when we want to get some learning materials,just click the mouse will make them appear on the screen,so people hold that computer is becoming more intellect like human beings.However,every coin has two sides..In the Information Age,people lost the ability to think independently and classify what is useful to them or not,that is to say,computer alters people's way of thinking.Take the following situation for example,when students are asked to write a composition,their first action is to open up their laptop and type the title on the website.There is no doubt that they get nothing from the homework at all. For my opinion,computer is just a tool for us to become more competitive and only people can think in a logical way,so only thinking by ourselves can we make full use of the computer.