题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
There exists a saying like this,"the real danger is not the computer will start to think like man,but that man will begin to think like the computer"such an opinion really make sense,as more and more people are adversely affected by the computer. There is no denying that computer brought us much information.For instance,when we want to get some learning materials,just click the mouse will make them appear on the screen,so people hold that computer is becoming more intellectual like human beings.However,every coin has two sides..In the Information Age,people no longer be capable of thinking independently and classifying what is useful to them or not,that is to say,computer alters people's way of thinking.Take students for example,when students are required to write a composition,their first action is to open up their laptop and type the title on the website.There is no doubt that they get nothing from the homework at all. For my opinion,computer is just a tool for us to be more competitive and only people can think in a logical way,so only thinking by ourselves can we make full use of the computer.