题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
文章学术词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;作者句法知识扎实,但文中从句数量稍显不足;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
The public are exposed to the rank of each profession in the university through china or the world compared to the past when there are only a limited range of rank about university. Currently, utilities in increasing amount make this kind of list of profession or college in china. There are different opinions regarding this phenomenon. First of all, some believes that the list of the profession in college provides criterion for us to compare each other. It goes without saying that the students could choose the most suitable university and major. However, some people believes there are too many utilities in the market, among which it includes some agencies without qualification for selection. This pose a great threat to the normal selection and list of the profession. people and their children could be confused about so many ranking lists. As far as I am concerned, there should be ranking list of the profession, which can distinguish the good and the bad. But the related government departments should spare no efforts to restriction of ranking institutions. Parents should be prepared to supply the advice to their children.