2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

可适当增加学术词汇的使用量；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

There is no doubt that every individuals desire success, but how to become a successful folks? The view on the way to success vary from person to person. There are some holding the opinion that enough preparation is the crucial key for success. Abrahum Lincoln's, one of the greatest presidents in American hestory, famous remark, "Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend first four sharpening the axe." From these words, I take a attitude that we laid emphasis on preparation be fore we work if we aspire success. Meanwhile, advantageous preparation also need some condition, such as perseverance and diligence. Preparation is closely related to success. Thus, as college student, we should spare no effort to get ourselves ready. Only in this way can we gain more successful chances.