2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活，希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。

There is no doubt that every individuals desire success, but how to become a successful folks? The view on the way to success varies from person to person. There are some holding the opinion that enough preparation is the crucial key for success. Abrahum Lincoln's, one of the greatest presidents in American history, famous remark, "Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend first four sharpening the axe." From these words, I take the attitude that we laid emphasis on preparation before we work if we aspire success. Meanwhile, advantageous preparation also needs some condition, such as perseverance and diligence. Preparation is closely related to success. Thus, as college student, we should spare no effort to get ourselves ready. Only in this way can we gain more chances of success.