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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；从句和复杂句用的不错，但部分句子还有一些小问题；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。
In this picture we can see two kinds of student, the first who sat down in front of the computer and playing computer game, and another who are study hard for his dream that she is eager to have a good future. The picture tells us a truth that is how much we will get tomorrow it depends on how much we efforts today. When we are middle school students, it is a dream for most students that is has a varied collage life so we try our best to get the chance to go to collage. But the reality always be different with our dream, it seems that we are lost our dream. Some of us are always play truant, even forget we still a student and study is our first task. From my perspective, collage life is significance for us, we should set a high value on our time, do something that better for our future, so that one day when we recall that time we will not regret.
