Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;很好的运用了从句,但部分句子稍有瑕疵;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
In this picture we can see two kinds of student, the first who sat down in front of the computer and playing computer game, and another who are study hard for his dream that she is eager to have a good future. The picture tells us a truth that how much we will get tomorrow it depends on how much we efforts today. When we are middle school students, it is a dream for most students that may be a varied collage life, so we try our best to get the chance to go to collage. But the reality always be different with our dream, it seems that we are lost our dream. Some of us are always play truant, even forget we still a student and study is our first task. From my perspective, collage life is significance for us, we should make full use of our spare time to expand our scope of knowledge,and we should acquire knowledge and skills for the increasingly fierce social competition, so that one day when we recall that time we will not regret.