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hello everyone.from my perspctive,money is not the most nessary thing for people's life.for exemple,one of my brother who is a poor man,but he have a happy life.on the contary,i have a bad life.i learn a lot from he.i know have a healthy body is more improtant than money.so,i plan to have a list about what i should cost a week and how much i can cost.