邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

文章在句法方面做的很棒，复杂句的比例可适当提高；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。

From 2010,China has come about many violence in shool which make people shock.While being shocking ,everybody fall into meditate:how can we do to improve school safety? Festly,shool's authority had better emplore some security guard who have right to limit students.Scondly,teachers need to teacher that if you have conflict with others,violence is the last way to deal with these conflict.