题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
学术词汇能比较准确的使用,不过拼写错误稍多;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
As the society developed so fast, computer becomes a commen equipment for most families. Many people began to use computer to get information, do office work, make friends or even professional training. But what on earth is the relationship bewteen computer and man? comuter opens a new time when people are liberated from the restrict of location. Information delivered in a fast speed that never appeared. make the culture bloosm.