2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。

With rapid social and economic development,online shopping has become a fashion.Increasingly people prefer shopping online. Shopping online brings people convenience.You can purchase goods at home.On the other hand,there are lots of type of goods more than the market and maybe you can get it so cheap.However,no garden has no weeds.Shopping online has some limits.For example,if you buy a clothes in the Intrenet you can not try it on that lead to the size is not your size.In addition,the quality of goods are not proved.The real is usually different from the picture. In my view, you can purchase some goods that unique and can not buy on the market.But if you ask for the quality of ware you better go to the physical store.