2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。

With the society and tecnology developing,the computer comes into every people's life.As the computer's function are gradually stronger,many people will have a question if the computer will instead of the Man.For this issue,each people has their own opinions. someone hold that the importance of the computer will be more heavy in our lives with the time going on.They think that we will depent on the computer more in the future and some areas may be instead of Man.But It is also someone arguing that the Man will be dominent in the history all the time no matter how the world change. As far as my concerned,I think the Man has their own thoughts,which is priority to everything in the world.The position won't be insteaded by others.