2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

With the society and techology developing,the computer comes into people's life.As the computer's function are gradually stronger,many people will have a question if the computer will be instead of the Man.For this issue,each person has their own opinions. someone holds that the importance of the computer will be more heavy in our lives with the time going on.They think that we will depend on the computer more in the future and some areas may be instead of Man.But It is also someone arguing that the Man will be dominant in the history all the time no matter how the world change. As far as my concerned,I think the Man has their own thoughts,which is priority to everything in the world.The position won't be insteaded by others.