题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
With the society and technology developing,the computer comes into people's life.As the computer's function are gradually stronger,many people will have a question if the computer will be instead of the Man.For this issue,each person has their own opinions. someone holds that the importance of the computer will be more heavy in our lives with the time going on.They think that we will depend on the computer more in the future and some areas may be instead of Man.But It is also someone arguing that the Man will be dominant in the history all the time no matter how the world change. As far as my concerned,I think the Man has their own thoughts,which is priority to everything in the world.The position won't be changed by others.