2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；全文结构较为严谨；作者应适量增加从句的使用量。

with the development of technology ,computer has become more and more important in our daily life.people use computer to work and to play,some of us even can't life without computer. however,there is no denying the fact that we had ignored our friends and relations when we play on the computer games.on no account can we forget our real emotions which is of vital importance for us. as far as my concerned,every coin has it too sides,we should take advantage of the computer correctly to make the computer serves us better.