作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
Due Attention Should Be Given To The Study of Chinese Nowadays,there exists an increasingly serious social problem that more and more students ignore the study of Chinese.According to a survey,about 65% students don't listen to the Chinese in the class.There are a couple of reasons booming this phenomenon. With the development of economy,many people believe that only being good at economics,industry and so on can live better.So they believe the Chinese is useless.And some people recognize the Chinese as an old fashion,which nobody will work harder on it.Moreover,a lot of people hold the view that Chinese is very boring.But Chinese has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life,which is a wealth of China.Without it,we may lost our spiritual wealth,and social will be drawn in chaos. As for me ,taking into account all of these factors,I reach the realizetion that we should take more time and place great emphasis in the study of Chinese. And the government should take more measures to solve this problem around the whole society.