2000年考研英语作文真题:世界商业捕鱼

作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

What the alarming drawing is trying to express is that the number of fishes dramatically decreased because of world commercial fishing. In the first picture,there were various kinds of fish and only one boat in1990.On the contrary,there were merely one fish and a quantity of boats in1995. There is no denying that the primary purpose of pictures is to reveal a common and serious problem in the world that is that the limited ocean resources are runing out owing to over-fishing.If we take no measures,there will be no fish in the ocean.Our environment will suffer a great destruction and people will suffer from what they have done. Apparently,it is high time that we took effective measures to solve this problem.Previously,our authorities should make strict laws to control commercial fishing.Concurrently,we should enhance the awareness of people that the ocean resources are vital to us and appeal to people to protect natual resources.Only by taking joint effort,can we solve the problem.