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I have a good friend.We're classmate.She's name Anna.She's 13 years old.She's bigger than me.She's very beautiful.She have a lot of hobbies,so she likes reading books and singing and swiming and sporting ect.but I like sporting and watching TV.She's a good student.She's kind of me.We're go to school together in the morning.We're always playing and finishing our homework together afer school.