小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend,he is a cool boy,he have long hair and big eyes,he is five old;he like football,English book and play game.he is Chinese,he birthday is July 15.he face is very black.he at Shengzhen,new.he have a little fat.he parents in Hunan.he have two sister.our classmate like her very much