2008年6月21日英语四级作文真题:互联网

句子错误偏多，建议修改；上下文衔接稍显不流畅；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，另外文中有较多拼写错误；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

In mordern world,we all use the internet,and it is more and more closer to our life,so it's very important for everyone. In my opinon,it's very useful,such as shopping,watching movies,and so on,it can heip us.so I think that learning it well is useful,and kwoning a skill is important,it can help us to do mang things,