2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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on excessive packaging at present , a lot of goods make all kinds of packaging .I think that company want to buy their something .The second they think it could make beautiful of their goods .The third packaging can accivide high pay .I don't agree this way .I feel excessive packaging unuselly.It is cost our much money while we haven't need. so we advice that packaging goods should less.