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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
Parental care is vital to ensure a child’s healthy development． Children who do not stay with their parents tend to develop unhealthy tendencies both in their behavior and personality． A recent survey of these children made in Hunan Province has found that students with absentee parents usually perform badly in their studies．Most of them have psychological problems． The survey also found that these children are also badly hurt by a feeling that they are different from children whose parents remain at home．It is quite easy for them to feel lonely and unhappy．They have difficulty communicating with others and cannot acquire the abilities they should have obtained at their age．When a serious flood hit a village in Hunan last year,11 of the l2 children killed were from such families． Something must be done to help the children left behind in rural areas．
