小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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My new teacher is young man.He has a little fat.Have a glass in the face.Look like a old man.He is twety-one.He wife is house-women.My teacher is match teach in my middle school.He has a Jeep.Jim is him son.we are classmate.He is Chinese.He home in Shanghai.So i like my new teacher.