小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Minna is a nice girl. She is my good friends and we often play with each other. She is 15 years old. We're the same age. She likes swimming. I likes swimming too. She swims very good. We often swim together. Shi always smiles because she likes smiling. In the morning, she smiles to everybody and ever one feel warm. She often says smiling is the bridge to the friendship. I think she is polite. She is very helpful, too. She often helps me with my lessons. We usually learn from each other. Minna loves eating chips. She isn't very fit. But she plans to change now. Good luck with her new lifestyle. I like Minna.