小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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My new teacher is a young man.He has a little overweight.Have a glass in the face.Look like an old man.He is twety-one.His wife is house-women.My teacher is english teach in the middle school.He has a Jeep.Jim is he is son.We are classmate.He is Chinese.He homes in Shanghai.So I like my new teacher.