2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

Since the day that the network technology was invented, our human beings had too much expectation to it. Until nowadays, the network not only provides us colorful and convenient life. But also pushing us into the information explosion era. We can not suppose how will our life go on without the network.Paper letters will sharply decrease our speed.And we can only learn the latest news from the next day's newspaper and TV programs.Many people will think we can do nothing without the Internet. In my opinion, the network both has benefit and harm.There is no doubt that the convenience come from the Internet.But it is also significant importance that so many people are addicted into it.We can't avoid the unhealthy information,rubbish email and so on from the internet.But I'am want to say that if we get away from the original idea of the network design, in the end,the victim is going to be ourselves.