文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;全文结构较为严谨。
English is the bridge to world,nowadays,English is of the vital importance in our daily life.We use English to communicate with foreigners and do business with them.In short,English has played an important role in our life. Recently,I found some of the classmates are lack of confidence in English,but on no account can we give up learning English.For this,I will tell you some advice. First of all,we can listen some English songs which can help you to understand English better.Moreover,if time permits,we can read English-Chinese dictionary carefully from cover to cover, which can widen our vocabulary.Last but not least,it's significant to use English frequently in daily life.