小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a friend. His name is Luo Yucong, but we don't call his name, we call him Cong tou. He lives in Meizhou,but I am in Shenzhen. We keep in touch with each other by internet. We have not met for two years.we help each other,when we meet trouble in life. He is my best friend!.