2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

Recent year,along with the advancement of the society more and more issues bought to our attention,one of which is that how should parents help children to be independent. There is old saying:"different people have different views."Some people suppose that the parents helps children is in order to children easy to do everything .They claim the child is too young to dong something.But other argue that if the parent cannot stop away help children.They will give rise they're children cannot to be independent. As I see it,I will in support of children be independence.Being Independent is best for the grown of children. In order to change the situation,Parents should not help they're children independent.They should more less to do everything for they’re children and let them do everything by themselves if they can do it.Parent away loves they children.Nevertheless,parents too much to protect them it will harm for them.