题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用学术词汇;文中衔接词丰富;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句。
Over the recent years ,there are a growing a tendency that people in growing numbers are thinking like a computer,which has aroused public concern. This alone that makes us talk inevitably about it. The issue ,man thought mechanically,may bring about lots of negative impacts on us. To begin with,human nature that is nice landscape will die out,which destruct the diversity of human's expression,consequently the world will be a bleak place.In addition,the interaction between people plays significantly important roles in our life,works and studies.Yet,it may breach the communication for us being similar with machine.To sum up,it is urgent for us to aware of the problem and handle it. As for me,no one other than us should strive to avoid thinking mechanically,and advocate positive power.Only when we ourselves do it,is it possible for more people to follow to do it,and in the end,can the world be a better place.