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I have a new teacher.Her name is Jane.She has golden long hair.She is very beautiful.She is tall and sex.She likes beautiful scket.She aways smiles on her face. She was from Amairica last mouth,Beacuse she likes China so much.She speaks English is better than speak Chinese.She can speak French too. She teachs our English class.She is kind of us.Our classmate lovely her.She has three classes every day. She lives in at the school.