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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17426
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分87.5分
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文章词汇表达丰富,学术词汇积累做的也很棒;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;全文结构较为严谨。

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Over the recent years,there are a growing tendency that people in growing numbers are thinking like a computer,which has aroused public attentions. This alone that makes us to talk inevitably about it. The issue ,a man thought mechanically,may bring about lots of negative impacts on us.To begin with,human nature that is nice landscape will die out,which destruct the diversity of human's expression.Consequently ,the world will be a bleak place.In addition,the interaction between persons plays significantly essential roles in our life,works and studies.Yet,it may breach the communicating for us being similar with machine.To sum up,it is urgent for us to aware of the problem and to handle it. As for me,no one other than us should strive to avoid thinking mechanically,and promote social positive power.Only when we ourselves do it,is it possible for more person to follow to do it,and at the end,can the world be a better place.

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