2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

there are most people questioned? its man control the computer or computer control the man.i think,man is still the controller although it seems not that obviously. one thing is that man is the conquer of a lot things in world cause we are the most clever animol .we all knew that point.we build buildings,creat new productions,we have feeling.the another thing that can explain the problem is the phenomenon that man and computer are getting too clink makes people mixed.that,for every one,we use computer to get some help,somehow we could depend on it.but its all normal .in all,man still the no.1.and we all thanks computer. man and computer,it makes life brighter and wider.