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Nowadays,there is no doubt that many people make many idea to make money with the rapid development of society and economy.It brings about many serious problems, such as many goods be package more.consequently, the special attention must be devoted to this problem. There is many factors accounting for this phenomenon .First and foremost, people want the gift look at beautiful and expensive , so that many business person package the goods more and more .Furthermore, if the gift look at beautiful and expensive ,the gift might more expensive.Last but not least , more and more people join in the market ,business person compete the consume . Form what has been discussed above , I learn about that the present is too bad , it will waste natural resources ,and make the society general mood descend .We can advocate people to thrifty make natural.If everybody could reduce buy over package goods ,the business person have to reduce produce the goods.
