3.参考词汇:牛津--Oxford费用--fee
作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
Dear Sir/Madame, I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London. As a student at Oxford University , I’d like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food? How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the next day, I’d like to know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London. Yours, Li Hua