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2008年考研英语作文真题:你一条腿,我一条腿,你我一起,走南闯北

发布时间:2013-05-20 22:01浏览次数:19623
要求:
题目:你一条腿,我一条腿,你我一起,走南闯北(题目需自拟)
说明 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay
要求
1.describe the drawing briefly
2.explain its intended meaning
3.give your comments

字数:200满分:100分


用户的作文(系统评分59.0分
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行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以;作者应适量增加从句的使用量;学术词汇偏少,且文中有部分拼写错误。

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From the picture we can know that two person who have a only leg,but they trip together without tools. The carton tell us the importance of help each other.As an old saying goes "more people can make light lighting". To begain with,we can get through somewhere which we cannot go alone,by other's help.In addition, diffcult work become easy when you do with other,which can save time and improve the effective of job.What's more,we can be hight think of ourself by help each other so that people realize the happiness of life rather than the dark of goble. As for as I am concerned ,the virtue of help each other,is absence of people in current socity,insead of greed and selfness.If we can take more account of other,the world will be perfect.It is hight time that call on our meaning of the impartance of help each other.

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