2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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There is a phenomenon about excessive packaging getting more obvious in shops now,which needs to be focus on. On one hand,with the deveopment of the society, the level of consuming come to be rised.what is more, possessing a beautiful packaging symbolize a noble status in some extent. But, as far as I am concerned,it is necessary for producer to make a great impression on others through a perfect packaging. However, an excessive packaging is also a luxary, which is hard to shoulder.