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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6292
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些学术词汇;句式变化较为明显,句法基础不错;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

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Trust is the most beautiful thing in the world.It controls your life,decides the job you occupy,and friends you make.Setting up trust is relative to mutual communication.Whatever in love,in friendship or in family,trust can help you not alone any more. There was a time when I lost trust.And I'm assured that it must be the darkest day I've ever met.Jecy,my best friend,who treats me as her soul mate,tell a lie on me that she had to pay off the debt before the deadline,or she would be urged to leave school.I was empathetic when hearing such a bad news and make efforts on owing and earning money during that time.However one night,I happened to know that the money she needed just for travelling with her boyfriend.How sorrow I was!We lost the basic factor between our friendship,that's the trust. maintaining trust is important to make friends and cultivate emotions as well.When it comes to love,a couple is difficult to keep admiring each other if there is no trust.Thus,once you want to cherish the life you are now living in,don't forget to maintain trust,not only to your friends,families,lovers,but also to yourself.

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