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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17426
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分79.5分
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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

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Nowadays, we are living a information explosion era, and the world is flooded with all kinds of information: as a saying goes,"A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention." So what we can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. As we all known, we can know about a large number news of all over the world from Internet or mobile phone. It is common to see the advertisements of business and the Eight Diagrams when we once opening the computer. These make us feel puzzled and lose ourselves easily. Of cause , it is good for us which may help us know more about national politics at the first time. It closed to the distance between people and countries and make our life become more and more convenient. However, not all kinds of information is good for us.We should learn to how to choose the useful information and resist temptations.For example, we had better collect some useful information and regular website before searching. In a word, human beings should adhere to the faith that we should not be distracted by irrelevant information.

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