题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Nowadays, we are living an information explosion era, and the world is flooded with all kinds of information: as a saying goes,"A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention." So what we can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. As we all known, we can know about a large number of news of all over the world from Internet or mobile phone. It is common to see the advertisements of business and the Eight Diagrams when we once opening the computer. These make us feel puzzled and lose ourselves easily. Of course, it is good for us which may help us know more about national politics at the first time. It closed to the distance between people and countries and make our life become more and more convenient. However, not all kinds of information is good for us.We should learn to how to choose the useful information and resist temptations.For example, we had better collect some useful information and website before searching. In a word, human beings should adhere to the faith that we should not be distracted by irrelevant information.