2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

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With the rapid development of society,more and more people live in a better live,who want to pursue a spiritual wealth and improve the ability of themselves.So in many families,parents send their kids to art classes,which has caused a heated debate . Some people believe that sending kids to art classes can develop kid's art ability which can help them to become a more excellent people.In addition,they believe that art classes is also a habit during kid's free time.But other people take an opposite side. They firmly recognize that whether go to the art classes depends on the willings of kid.Because some parents strongly send their children to art classes with permissions of their kids. As I am concerned,the art classes are just like a double-edged sword.On the one hand,with them the kid may develop comprehensively,but on the other hand, the kid will lose many time to do what they want.So I believe that one point should be kept in mind that we should take sensible use of them,always being the master of them.