小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分；连词使用偏少。

I have a good friend. her name is Lucy. She is a 10 years old girl.She is very beautiful! She has long black hair,two big black eyes and a red mouth. Her voice is better,she is good at singing. She ia a clever girl.She likes reading books,playing computer games and chess.She is also nice.She often helps us.Our classmates are like her very much. This is my good friend,do you like her ?